Virid tranquility

The mountains echo,

with the diminishing cold,

as the sun rays tiptoe,

and set everything to gold.

The birds begin to chirp,

the flowers begin to bloom,

the river starts to tumble,

breaking the silent gloom.

A gentle breeze tugs the grasses,

the cliff falls down deep,

dainty flowers of approaching spring,

begin to sprout and peep.

A blue sky stretches vividly,

landscaping the scene,

so much happening, yet so still,

like it has always been.

Gazing at the flamboyance,

and the beauty of this sight,

Nature composes harmonies,

beats darkness by her light.

The everlasting Roman queen,

she brings heaven down to Earth,

every chirp and every bloom,

adds to her plentiful mirth.

In her womb I find myself,

in her womb, I’m lost,

though she might be thinning down,

her beauty does not exhaust.

82 Comments Add yours

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much.

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  1. besondersite says:

    A beautiful poem on nature and such vivid imagery! Lovely work 😇

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much P! I’m so glad you like to.

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Yleniaely says:

    Absolutely wonderful!!! ❤️

    Liked by 5 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much Ely! Wow.

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  3. Good descriptive words of nature’s dawning. Great photo too.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much friend. That is such a wonderful thing to say. Cheers.

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      1. You are so welcome my pleasure reading your words.

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      2. Shanyu says:

        That means the world friend. Peace.

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  4. Very beautiful poetry.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much Nico. Peace and greetings.

      Liked by 1 person

  5. vidhi says:

    I really looved it! How can u write so wonderfully!!💜💜 Last line is ,was and will be 100 percent true. If you like to read books pls do visit my blog☺

    Liked by 7 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much Vi. That means so much. I am so thrilled to get this response. I will be there in 5,4,3,2

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much C!

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  6. Cheemnonso says:

    Your imagery never disappoints. Lovely take on nature!!

    Liked by 8 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much friend. It means everything coming from you guys. Thank you.

      Liked by 2 people

  7. yassy says:

    Beautifully written poetry… 😍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much friend. Cheers.

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      1. yassy says:

        Cheers 🥂

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much Friend.

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  8. Lia says:

    Can I ever stop saying “Oh my!” here? I don’t know if I can. This is another beauty from you, Shanyu!!

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      You are so kind my friend. I appreciate your thoughts so much. Thank you milady. Thank you.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much friend. We need it really.

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  9. HappySoul says:

    This is absolutely beautiful writing . I loved the last few lines

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much friend. You really brought me a smile. Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind thoughts.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much!

      Liked by 1 person

  10. TasView says:

    Your words match the image beautifully … and what an incredible image!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much mate. That means so much. You have wonderful pictures yourself. Especially night ones from the Samsung.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. TasView says:

        Thanks, appreciate the feedback 🙂

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      2. Shanyu says:

        Pleasure.

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  11. rulookingforjesus says:

    Like this

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much.

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  12. Yiena says:

    I’m left with no words bfr the beauty of this piece~ 🙈💝

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      That is soo kind Y! Thank you so much dear.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Yiena says:

        Never mention it~ My pleasure dear~ 🙈💖

        Liked by 1 person

  13. Ishita Gupta says:

    Wow. Absolutely gorgeous. This was really really beautiful💛

    “Nature composes harmonies,
    beats darkness by her light.
    The everlasting Roman queen,
    she brings heaven down to Earth”

    I loved these lines especially. Such a marvellous description of nature Shanyu.

    Love and hugs,
    Ishita.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much friend. I cannot begin to thank you enough for these words. It means the world to me. Thank you.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Ishita Gupta says:

        Absolutely my pleasure!🤗

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  14. This feels like it should be accompanied by a rising tide of epic music! Such grace and power combined.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      This is one of the most impressive comment in so long. I’m so thrilled it speaks to you this way. Thank you so much for your timeless words. They are precious.

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  15. Beautifully written 👍

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much!

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  16. Latmospherique says:

    This is such a lovely and beautiful poem with images that talk to the soul and peace at every corner.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      I cannot thank you enough for these words. They make it even more beautiful. I’m so happy to have you here. Thanks and good day.

      Liked by 1 person

  17. Aushi says:

    Just another magnificent work of yours..👌👌👏👏
    Keep writing..
    Stay blessed 🤗😇💐

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Ah! It keeps on getting better. Thank you so much. Have a blessed day.

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  18. Very enjoyable, thank you

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much L! Means so much coming from you. Have a fantastic day.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much mate?

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      1. ☺️ your welcome

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      2. Welcome mate ☺️

        Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much friend.

      Liked by 1 person

  19. Gibberish says:

    Beautiful 💖💖

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  20. Ali Grimshaw says:

    This reads like a song of calm.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      I’m so thrilled it does! Thank you so much for stopping by.

      Liked by 1 person

  21. You’re a talented writer, Shanyu 💚 it’s beautiful!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      That means the world to me. Thank you so very much.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. K.L. Hale says:

        My pleasure!

        Liked by 1 person

  22. Ali Grimshaw says:

    A lovely poem. I especially like the opening lines,
    The mountains echo,

    with the diminishing cold,

    as the sun rays tiptoe,

    and set everything to gold.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so much Ali. It means a lot to me to know that you like my work. Please keep shining your light. Cheers.

      Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much.

      Liked by 1 person

  23. Beautiful poem, Shanu! Lovely imagery! I like the use of personification. Your poem is so rich in details, wonderfully complex!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Shanyu says:

      Thank you so very much C! I’m so glad my words were readtoday.

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  24. Ceridwensilverhart said it all.

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    1. Shanyu says:

      He did. Thank you so very much for stopping by. It’s a joy to see you here!

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