Stab me and prod me,
And clip both my wings,
Hurt me and mute me,
And burn all my things.
Stab me and prod me,
But just know my name,
‘Coz when I will rise back,
I’ll be doing the same.
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Hurt me and mute me,
But watch as I grow,
From ashes to fire,
A fire on snow.
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Come now and get me,
Vaporise me with pain,
You think you can break me,
But I’ll be back with the rain.
Sui Generis 
Wow. Just wow. This is such an intelligent work of art. I specifically love how you used the two main lines together in the first verse and then segregated them in the next two verses— this poem is very beautiful, eloquent and intelligent!
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Thank you so very much Maseera! It feels so good coming from you. Glad you liked the poem.
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My pleasure 😊 I think you should write more poems, you seem to be very good at it.
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Yes yes, I surely will. Thank you once again!
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I loved this. So effortlessly powerful, and beautiful at the same time❤ This is truly incredible🌷
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Thank you so much Ishita! I’m so glad you liked it!
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It is absolutely my pleasure❤🌺
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This is amazing!
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Thank you so much Harsh!
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I don’t know how but while reading your work i was going with rhythm🎵., fantastic job👏👏keep it up👍
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Thank you so much Aushi. Glad you like my work!
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Oh, my goodness!! The poem together with this image is so striking.
These lines: “Hurt me and mute me, / But watch as I grow,
/ From ashes to fire, / A fire on snow.” So beautiful.
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Thank you so very much Lia. It means so much to know that you like this work of mine. I am honoured to have such wonderful readers to my blog! Peace and greetings ❣️
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“But I’ll be back with the rain” – this is simply gorgeous, as is the whole poem – a tale of strength, resilience and triumph.
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Thank you so much!
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Nice poem.👌
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Thank you so very much!
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You are good, Shanyu.
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Thank you so much Yassy! Peace and greetings 💛
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You are very welcome..
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It’s great to come across your blog… Some vibrant thoughts here, loved the flow
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Thank you so very much. Peace to you. Have a wonderful week!
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Inspiring verses! I especially like the promise of the last line. No matter what people think of rain, whether they embrace it or villainize it, they can’t stop it’s return.
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Thank you so much. I’m glad my poetry resonated with you.
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OMG, these lines!!! “Hurt me and mute me, But watch as I grow!” Love it!!!
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy that my poetry has resonated so well with you.
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You’re welcome! 😄
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💛🤗
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This one is beautiful, very well written. Thank you for dropping by ♥️🙏😇.
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Thank you so very much dearest poet. The same goes to you. May you have a fantastic week!
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Thank you so much Shanyu♥️🙏😇.
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My pleasure 🥰
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♥️😇
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So jealous of the rhythm here.
Brilliantly written my friend 🖤
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Ha ha. Glad you like it so much. I guess the appreciation is mutual dearest.
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You’re too kind 👍🖤
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That means so much. I’m so happy too meet you dear friend. Here’s to new friendships 🥂
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Indeed! 😁🖤
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💛🖤
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Brilliant one Shanyu 🙂
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thank you so much dearest! have a wonderful day!
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An amazing poem, Shanyu and thank you for following Eugi’s Causerie I.
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Thank you so so much Eugi. Means so much coming from you. I hope to have touched you.
Sending you love and peace.
Yours,
Shanyu.
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You’re most welcome, Shanyu. 🤨
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😊💛 peace to you.
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😉
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I just… Love it.
VVN
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Thank you so much dearest friend. I’m glad you like it.
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Amazing work, Shanyu.💜💜
So wonderfully written man! I loved reading it.
And thanks for the follow. Your follow brought me my first notification of a century of followers.😅😅
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Thank you so much Chetna. Your words are so kind. Thank you.
Congratulations on your 100.
Here’s to many more🥂
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This is so beautifully composed, simple yet conveys the message direct. Easy to read, easy to understand hence easy to appreciate. You are very talented!
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Wow. Those are beautiful words man. I’m so glad to have you here and to receive this comment. Thank you so much. Thank you. Have a fantastic day
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