How Eternal?

I brood over the fact

eternity to be precise

If eternity accompanies

in life and demise.

Death doesn’t wait for any

nor the infant in the womb

How long can eternity stand itself

in its eternal tomb.

If it exists it always does

the most precious all around

timelessness might be radiating wisdom

waiting to be found.

If eternity doesn’t stick to time

how long has it been there

Trapped in its perpetuity

with eternity to bear.

‘Forever’ translates to eternity

‘love you forever’ we say

Is eternity locked in death

for it comes by anyway.

Eternity could be light years far

in the endless sky

It’s likely daunting upon us

or a complete lie !

Well we are not ones to judge

it could be eternally hidden

it must have crossed the upper limit

and time must have been ridden.

Time hasn’t caused any trouble

at least hasn’t taken away the glee

but it certainly is perplexing

how eternal eternity can be !

11 Comments Add yours

  1. Kunaal Peety says:

    Hey there, Shanyu! Great job mate. Keep it up and running for as long as you can.

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  2. Pankaj Bihani says:

    Amazing words…boded together!!

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  3. Sandeep Pise says:

    Congratulations for the blog. I liked both of your poems. May you write poems till eternity.

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    1. Thank you so much Sir.

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  4. Sushant Soni says:

    Fabulous job beta.. It is hard to comprehend that a boy of your age could right such a beautiful and meaningful poem. Well done.

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    1. Thanks Sushant chacha!

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  5. Parmeshwar Sarate says:

    This is really amazing, coming from someone who’s just 13. Thoughts seems to glide swiftly . Vocabulary is beyond age. Keep it up. Really proud. God bless you.

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    1. Thank you very much Sir

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  6. Anuradha Bihani says:

    Shanyu the gr8!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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  7. Shivaji Mante says:

    Very well written (expressed will be more appropriate….i think) Shanyu!!! Keep writing….

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